Coming fresh from the "Lonely Valley Case" this looks like an improvement over the fixed camera angles and I can't praise enough the story, visual presentation, as well as sound design - amazing.
I did mention my critique in the video and I will make a summary here - I think the antagonist wasn't menacing enough, because we spent no time in exploring his side, in a way the ending felt a little sudden, too obvious. Other minor issue I had is the door's animations, it really take a long time overall to move from one scene to the other. Also, you have this in all your games - it quits the application fast - you can put an ending screen or some credits so the player is able to take in that the game has ended instead of quit application. That's it.
Glad that you are improving with every project. Wish all the best to you! Cheers!
Pretty creepy game! I liked the story and feel bad for the guy! He just wanted some nostalgia! I had an inkling about who the killer might be, but dang I didn't expect that ending! Great job!
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Good game. I think it's a solid start but feel like it could be etched out a bit more. Left some feedback / suggestions at the end.
Thanks for playing! I will listen to your tips and they will be applied in the next game!
Another masterpiece - loved the game!
Coming fresh from the "Lonely Valley Case" this looks like an improvement over the fixed camera angles and I can't praise enough the story, visual presentation, as well as sound design - amazing.
I did mention my critique in the video and I will make a summary here - I think the antagonist wasn't menacing enough, because we spent no time in exploring his side, in a way the ending felt a little sudden, too obvious. Other minor issue I had is the door's animations, it really take a long time overall to move from one scene to the other. Also, you have this in all your games - it quits the application fast - you can put an ending screen or some credits so the player is able to take in that the game has ended instead of quit application. That's it.
Glad that you are improving with every project. Wish all the best to you! Cheers!
Thanks for the tips, I will update it
updated! thank you niven!
Wasn't sure what to expect but the scares really got me ! Love the game!
Thanks =)
Pretty creepy game! I liked the story and feel bad for the guy! He just wanted some nostalgia! I had an inkling about who the killer might be, but dang I didn't expect that ending! Great job!
Thanks for playing!
Thank you for making this game!
Lindo jogo! 5 estrelas fácil! Meu jogo fechou quando estava na jaula, é o final mesmo? ou tem continuação?